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    Arrow FINAL_Adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

    This is an adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

    Everybody knows the pinocchio story-geppetto was creating a puppet which finally got alive.
    In my picture you see pinocchio just waking up in anger because geppetto was trying to paint his nose with pink colour.

    cheers.heri





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    Thumbs up

    Hey,
    Good idea and the scetch looks great..I will be waiting to see your progress.

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    looking intresting
    looking forword to see the finished work

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    hi marilena and oren90, thanks a lot!cheers

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    looking for a better composition,

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    Good job on the colours and the face. The black branch in the foreground is a bit too intrusive, though, and seems to be on its own. I think there needs to be more branches in the background to improve the depth and to better define the environment.

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    I like the glowing colors.

    Here I see my next training issue: Human faces and bodys.

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    Late you might be Irawan but what a fantastic, quick start. Love the way it's going so far.

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    looking really good the colors are so vivid

    the only thing that doesn't seem right to me is that the eyes pop out to much
    if you would put alighter color as the pupil or the whole eyes it will be alright but maybe you intended it to pop out like this

    but still looking good

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    i like the face very much here

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    hi baron impossible, thanks a lot for your advice.
    hi vaejoun,thanks!
    hi nickillus, your thread is amazing,touch my soul.
    hi oren 90, i still dont know right now,i have to try a lot.
    himoonchild, i am happy you like her.

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    close up and details

    hi,
    just small update.cc are welcome

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    looks awasome every update and i'm getting more anxious to see the next

    it seems you know how to use colors well there is such a great harmony bitween them i especially liked the wings it looks amazing

    keep up the good work.

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    Newborn - Forrest Queen

    again small update.cheers

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    Yep, that wing is looking rather fabulous.

    Anyhow, as for other thoughts... well, I suppose the light's emanating off her hands, but I still can't help but think something's off with the breasts' lighting. (or rather, the shadows) But more importantly, her right shoulder seems unnatural to me, and the right arm, at least the upper arm, is much too long. I think. Or I'm just fooled by the left's perspective-shortening. Eheh. Well, would recommend giving that arm there a double-check, at least.

    Edit: oh dearie, you're updating faster than I can type... heeh. Looking even more splendid, but I can help but question where the right arm is leading my eye - seems like a dead end? Might be out on a limb here, but since I've got doubts about the whole arm already, I wonder how it'd look if that arm instead was bent over the body, so to speak. Well. Just a thought, wouldn't bet on it being much of a good idea.

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    Hi Irawan,nice to see you here,nice colors you have on your image,i think i ll subscribe in this challenge,im not sure ill have enaugh time or no,but i gonna try

    good luck!take care
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    Your concept is very beautiful and I'm liking how polished the rendering is becoming.

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    i see some naked fairy, where is that connected with the newborn topic?

    If i think hard enough i could imagine that this fairy is "newborn"?
    Tho i don't think those are born with C cup boobs, nope.

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    i really like the rendering esp the wing......but i agree with RANDIS its not showing the concept and there is a bit problem with anatomy

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    I think this is pretty darn excellent, though as the sketch has developed so has she in the bosom area! I think gravity would effect her a tad more than it has. Great work, though.

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    A fairy emerging from a chrysalis, and a stunning picture. Love the colours, but I also wonder what gravity would do to those breasts, then again she is a mythical creature.

    I'm amazed some people don't see Newborn as it's pretty obvious to me. Update soon please.


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    Arghhh I want to kill you, awesome work! In this contest all people are very talented!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Spot View Post
    A fairy emerging from a chrysalis, and a stunning picture. Love the colours, but I also wonder what gravity would do to those breasts, then again she is a mythical creature.

    I'm amazed some people don't see Newborn as it's pretty obvious to me. Update soon please.
    Yeah, the Newborn aspect was obvious to me.

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    Very nice use of color. Waiting for more updates!

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    that's beautiful, but those breasts seem to be defying gravity.

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    Newborn - Forrest Queen

    hi everybody thanks a lot for your feedback and contructive comments.

    here is my new sketch

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    Quote Originally Posted by R a n d i s View Post
    i see some naked fairy, where is that connected with the newborn topic?

    If i think hard enough i could imagine that this fairy is "newborn"?
    Tho i don't think those are born with C cup boobs, nope.

    the butterfly has something really different compare to other animal or human.

    i just want to show the metamorposis of butterfly:


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    I like the new sketch a lot better. It works much better for the concept.

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    I prefer the new sketch version, but I think it's will be great to give more space to subject, in this sense the first it's better, that's my opinion -__^ what do you think? Anyway compliments because your works it's really amazing.

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    This is an adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

    I want to tell something different for my concept.
    Geppeto is not lonely old man,he wife and has 2 kids, his job is making a pupet from wood, in his city he is famous because of that.
    after tousand pupets he is done,he get board with his job.
    one night he try something totaly different as ussual, he is not making animal pupet but he try to make small kid like pinocchio.
    he is so happy and find joy when he is doing "finish,now i give him color..." he took the color and he start to paint his hood.
    but sudenly the puppet was life and taking/brake his brush....and also hit him from the cahier,oh what happens then?
    and the puppet sad"i dont like yellow hood,you know that!"

    i am happy with geppetto character but pinocchio...?if i try something totaly different i am worried people doesnt recognize anymore.but probably better.i dont know...probably you can tell me what is good..

    enjoy ..i hope you like my new concept.
    cc are welcome,
    cheers.heri

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