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    Arrow FINAL_Adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

    This is an adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

    Everybody knows the pinocchio story-geppetto was creating a puppet which finally got alive.
    In my picture you see pinocchio just waking up in anger because geppetto was trying to paint his nose with pink colour.

    cheers.heri

    FINAL_Adaptation of the Pinocchio story.

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    Thumbs up

    Hey,
    Good idea and the scetch looks great..I will be waiting to see your progress.

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    looking intresting
    looking forword to see the finished work

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    hi marilena and oren90, thanks a lot!cheers

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    looking for a better composition,

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    Good job on the colours and the face. The black branch in the foreground is a bit too intrusive, though, and seems to be on its own. I think there needs to be more branches in the background to improve the depth and to better define the environment.

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    I like the glowing colors.

    Here I see my next training issue: Human faces and bodys.

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    Late you might be Irawan but what a fantastic, quick start. Love the way it's going so far.
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    looking really good the colors are so vivid

    the only thing that doesn't seem right to me is that the eyes pop out to much
    if you would put alighter color as the pupil or the whole eyes it will be alright but maybe you intended it to pop out like this

    but still looking good

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    i like the face very much here

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    hi baron impossible, thanks a lot for your advice.
    hi vaejoun,thanks!
    hi nickillus, your thread is amazing,touch my soul.
    hi oren 90, i still dont know right now,i have to try a lot.
    himoonchild, i am happy you like her.

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    close up and details

    hi,
    just small update.cc are welcome

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    looks awasome every update and i'm getting more anxious to see the next

    it seems you know how to use colors well there is such a great harmony bitween them i especially liked the wings it looks amazing

    keep up the good work.

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    Newborn - Forrest Queen

    again small update.cheers

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    Yep, that wing is looking rather fabulous.

    Anyhow, as for other thoughts... well, I suppose the light's emanating off her hands, but I still can't help but think something's off with the breasts' lighting. (or rather, the shadows) But more importantly, her right shoulder seems unnatural to me, and the right arm, at least the upper arm, is much too long. I think. Or I'm just fooled by the left's perspective-shortening. Eheh. Well, would recommend giving that arm there a double-check, at least.

    Edit: oh dearie, you're updating faster than I can type... heeh. Looking even more splendid, but I can help but question where the right arm is leading my eye - seems like a dead end? Might be out on a limb here, but since I've got doubts about the whole arm already, I wonder how it'd look if that arm instead was bent over the body, so to speak. Well. Just a thought, wouldn't bet on it being much of a good idea.

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