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    Nice

    Got something of a lonesome navigator. Or perhaps a bit of those aliens of "Alien", who were sitting in their chairs at the beginning of that movie (though they were dead already).

    I also admit not to lose all your lining within the dark shadows. Perhaps adding some bright edges in order not to lose them all.


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    silliKONe : Thank you very much, that`s what i call a good critique! I`m working on these points. But don`t worry about the linedrawing, I`ll remove it in a later stage if I start with the actual painting...

    DeadInTheAttic: thanks, yeah in the end there won`t be any lines anymore, just form and value.... i hope so

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    Man, I could have SWORN I posted on this thread before . . . guess not.

    I thought I'd said I really, really dig the jester hat aspect of his helmet. It's fascinatingly incongruous, but comes together quite strongly. I think the gesture of his slump would be strengthened by simply narrowing the ellipse of his facemask vertically.

    Looking forward to seeing how this renders up.

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    you mean this is still the sketch stage? whoa...we are in for a treat!
    i actually really dig the line work, but it sounds like you have something special up your sleeve. i look forward to the evolution of this one!

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    Jason C-M: thanks a lot... good point I`ll put this to action.... I`ll have some very very busy days in front of me..

    silliKONe: thats right but it will be quite a birth..
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    hey, i bet this is going to be an awesome piece in the end. have seen some of your other stuff and it kick some ass. your dominance entry was one of my favorites. so, as silliKONe said, we are in for a treat!

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    rickardwestman : thanks a lot, I also liked yours...

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    Very nice piece so far, one suggestion though. Try to build more contrast between your focal point and the background. He is kind of lost in the muddy mid-tones. Darken the bg more or lighten him up a bit and it will read tons better.

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    hi great sketch you have there and an intresting concept as well
    silliKONe gave some great advice so i'll just try to add a bit to what he said
    about the color i'm sure you will add it later just a little advice if you would
    use less saturated color where you want the focal point to be and as it goes
    away from the focal point you should use the more saturated colors
    this way the area where the focal point is will pop out the moment
    someone will see the work and this will be the first place his eyes would go

    hope it will help you
    and keep up the good work

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    Chance. thanks. thats what I`m doing at the moment..

    oren90: thanks, in the latest post the projection was just a placeholder, the final piece is looking very different...even so thanks for the good advices ..

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    ... a bit more

    a little update, I worked basically on the background. Didn`t work on the projection yet and also the reflecting lights are missing... still a week to go

    comments ans crits are welcome

    thanks

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    I really love how this is coming out so far, although I think you may be getting ahead of yourself on the glow of the projection. I'd get some texture in there too, if you're going for steampunk there should be some grit in the corners of all those pipes and stuff. The only thing I'm confused about is the entertainer's position. He's bringing the projection to life, but he looks very dead or at least disinterested. I would expect him to be looking at his creation. I do love the feel of this, and the colors though. And your linework is fantastic! I can't comprehend working in lines Good luck, we don't have much time!!

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    ThinMint- thanks. Yeah sure grit, textures, ornaments and a lot of details are coming soon..
    the position of the entertainer looks lame and dead on purpose. the big machine sucks all his imagination and life out of him...

    by the way, you have some nice lifedrawings in your sketchbook
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    detail

    working working working

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    i really like this kind of designs, steampunk, brass metal, mmMmmm
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