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    Red face Useless Sketches

    Hello all! I'm new but I've been reading forums and such. I created an account so that I may improve. I'd like to work in the video game field one day but right now I'm still a kid and I have room for improvement. So please, take a look at my sketches, tear em up with critiques and advice!
    Please excuse the blue paper in the first sketch, I didn't have any white paper (if anyone knows how to resize that'd be a great heap of help!)
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    I see a lot of potential in you; just keep practicing and you'll do great.

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    Hi. You have great patience to do that robe texture on the 2nd drawing
    Great stuff.
    I hope that we will see more of your work, cause this is a nice start.

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    EDIT: My message got mucked up. xD

    I meant to say the hand in the first one was a little wonky and that the fingers should be a little more level.



    In the second one, his neck is way too thick, especially with such a childlike face. But the designs in the cloak are great. ♥

    My only crits for the last one are that her collarbone is too low, the muscles on her torso look a little odd, and her inner thigh should curve out just like the outer.

    : > Keep posting.

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    I would appreciate any advice or critiques.
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    Great start for a sketchbook! Not much to say yet, just keep working.
    On the other hand I just want to point out that the line describing the inner thigh of the left foot in the last piece should be bending the other way.

    Keep it up!

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    Oh thank you so much DKHutchenson for the advice! Do you have any ideas how I can go about practicing hands? I try drawing my own often but it turns out bad when I draw them on characters as opposed to just hands....

    Ah! That's a problem I have, I have a tendency to draw really childlike characters when I want to draw them more mature looking. I'll keep practicing!

    Zelda Geek: I have a tendency to fail at details! thanks for pointing that out!

    Maybe I should buy an anatomy book to fix all the muscles and such on the last picture..

    Thanks everyone who took time to comment/critique on these sketches! I'll update shortly!

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    Updates!

    It's been almost a week i think..... Anyways! here are some updates! This week i was watching Pocahontas and The Little mermaid

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