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Last edited by Londerson; November 12th, 2010 at 08:00 AM.
I think what you have going here is potential. I think the guy in green is interesting from an emotional standpoint. The expressions ad more life to images and makes the viewer more interested in the subjects portrayed. What you have to do now I think is invest some more time in the work. Give us some more variations in brush work and color. For instance the white behind the boy in the third image is too uniform in color and value so maybe try subtly applying a variety of hues. Simply put, just make our eyes "work".