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    Post my piece

    here is just a little something i made on photoshop using my of my addon brushes and new installed text ,please review and leave constructive criticism

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    Mebe starting a scetchbook would be better.

    The post is a little too "asking for it" putting it in the lounge.

    Looks cool but Photoshop did the most of what's going on there, Placing text and blotting some brushes ain't exactly an art so there's not much to crit.

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    I would the raise the possibility that one should learn to read before one posts on a forum that s/he isn't familiar with.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilaekae View Post
    I would the raise the possibility that one should learn to read before one posts on a forum that s/he isn't familiar with.
    I second this

    Crit for a crit!

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    Basically what zaorr said.

    It's all kind of too messy, the black blotches are blocking things out and seem excessive; it feels like the piece needs to be mirrored with the guns on the same horizontal line or at least an equal space from the edges, the colour of the text is too solid and there is a huge blank space in the centre which is probably where the focus should really be.

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    critique center, maybe? its there for SOME reason... something having to do with critiquing finished pieces... i dont know exactly tho

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    Wrongful thread locations aside, it would be a splendid idea for you to start a sketchbook! Also, be sure to upload any and all traditional work you may have. I do hope that photoshop isn't your one and only medium.

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    Paint splattering can acheive an effective graphic look, however in this case I'm afraid you've failed at successfully acheiving that. Also, for some of those graphic effects to may want to look into using illustrator, rather than PS, and also study graphitti art a bit for inspiration in terms of composition and such.

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