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    Hi everyone, just decided to enter the contest, looking forward to improve myself in this contest as well, will be posting my progress soon


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    entry 01 draft 01

    First draft on new born, till don't know what will emerge from there, just an image that pops up in my mind when I got the topic.

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    It kind of speaks for itself--they have obviously discovered something unknown, the story can be made up by the viewer.
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    Canvas extends waaaaay too high. I'm assuming the focus is supposed to be at the bottom, but with so much space my eyes don't want to go there.

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    Interesting take on it, Cyl1981. Looks promising already.
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    New born entry 2 draft 1

    Hi everyone, thanks for all the c&c, really sorry about the slow update, ran into some technical issues over the past few weeks, finally got it sorted. So here it is, my second idea for new born, I will go back to my first one, later on to see if I can channel it toward a new direction perhaps, it something I do personally to crank new ideas out of myself, once again all c&c are welcome.

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    New born entry 3 draft 1

    another idea pop up, will see how things go

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    The second entry is very eye catching! Nice colors and composition.

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    The third entry is personally my favorite.

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    i am really looking forward to what you come up with.

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    Hi everyone, have been busy on a number of cases and assignments, so I haven't got much time to work on my entry until now, but here is a quick update, hopefully will finish in time....

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    cool, i like it. love the colors/ I like the mood a bit better in the previous version, it had a more friendly sunny look, but i guess thats maybe not the mood you want here.
    The most close object bothers me a little bit, i liked the open view in the older version better where i could see more of the water stream. This roughly curved shape breaks the layout a bit imo.
    The scaling is not yet convincing, the castles look so small, feels like the foreground is close. I guess you will fix that later by adding smaller objects and landscape details.
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    cool, i like it. love the colors/ I like the mood a bit better in the previous version, it had a more friendly sunny look, but i guess thats maybe not the mood you want here.
    The most close object bothers me a little bit, i liked the open view in the older version better where i could see more of the water stream. This roughly curved shape breaks the layout a bit imo.
    The scaling is not yet convincing, the castles look so small, feels like the foreground is close. I guess you will fix that later by adding smaller objects and landscape details.
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