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    Fayve`s Sketchbook


    I want to improve my techic skills and hope to get some helpful input and comments
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    The problem that stands out to me is on the second piece, her proportions are off.
    Her lower leg and foot dont seem large enough to be proportionate...

    Keep up the good work though!

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    Yes, you are right. I had some problems with proportion of the lower leg because of the shortening.

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    more stuff, critic is welcome

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    new day new stuff

    new day new stuff

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    The Tree-Guy is year old and I´m not sure how to finish it
    there is one possible solution below: someone wants to cut the tree
    Another solution is fight like the lord of the rings
    also possible a big creature that is blowing strongly against the tree

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    bigger?


    The first one shows a collage overpainted with gouache - Size is A4.

    Then I decided to do a bigger version with acrylics - Size is a little bit bigger than a2. Here you can see the steps of work.
    Im not happy with the finished result - maybe I was unfocused sometimes.

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    -new archictecture drawing
    -old ink
    -new landscape doodle

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    Good first page for your sketchbook!
    Keep it up -Omerta

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    -Thanks for comment OmertA


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    you should work in this way, the other drawings are not of this level.
    clap clap for this sketch.

    Fayve`s Sketchbook
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    euh my blog of course.

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    Some of your drawings are quite nice, like the tree-man and the one Gax reposted. They show patience and grace. Your other drawings and especially your paintings feel a bit rushed. Take some time to work on your paintings and see what you can put together when you set your mind to it; not everything has to be a speedpainting.

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    @ Gax
    Yes many people are telling me the same ...maybe Iam good in creating landscape or architcture^^

    @dierat
    You are right, sometimes I should be more concentrated. Often I want to see a result in minuit, bat that´s probably not the best way to grow and to make more complex stuff.


    Thanks for the comments


    Two more older architecture drawings. The 2nd one took me nearly 9month(too much breaks )
    Fayve`s Sketchbook
    Fayve`s Sketchbook

    My nude drawing course finished last monday here a the last drawings. I will miss it. It´s the best training that exist and its nice with other people around.

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