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    few peices

    hi,
    a few bits, didnt want to clutter up more than one thread with. any thoughts or crits welcome, i'm looking for maybe ideas on the materials and backgrounds i think.. these aren't entirely finished, but are well on their way. thanks for taking a look.
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    ok..so my first thought was look at that leg!!!
    your anatomy is totally awesome!! and i think your poses are smooth too!
    my favourite are your first and last drawing, in both cases the legs blow me away!
    and in the last one i really like the bone hint...what i do not like in it thought now that i take a closer look is the feel...i don't now if he's suppose to flowt, to fall or anything air related, but it doesn't feel smooth

    a note on the colours you choose..try using more saturated colours and concentrate on a particular par of the drawing; use saturated lights with desaturated shades, and saturated shades with desaturated lights ;
    in the case of your first drawing, i would have made the orange highlight much more brighter and saturated

    make them shine!
    hope i helped
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