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    Cool NSFW - Cowgirl

    Hey CA!

    I'm not too good at backgrounds, so here is a disgusting attempt at one, lol. Anyway, main focus is the girl. Sorry about the subject matter.

    Enjoy.

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    Hey there,

    i think it isnt the worst backround i have ever seen btw

    first of all its is a well made piece of art !
    i like how you managed the light / shadow maybe you can give it a bit more contrast

    and i think you should redo some of the proportions . in my opinion the eyes are to big for the head , if you didn t do it on purpose =)

    anyway keep it up hope to see more of your stuff !

    greez Xo.

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    The background looks better than the figure, imo. The figure and the face just look a bit off to me. The anatomy of the specific parts is good enough, but they don't seem to fit together quite right. There are some issues, like the toes, and I think the lighting needs work. The lighting isn't quite a match for the environment. Some hint of denim texture on the pants would add realism. Good job on the horse. But I'm not sure I'd call this painting finished.

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    I updated it for you guys, let me know what you think.

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    Her head's a bit small, and kinda scary face. The sweat doesn't look like sweat, and with the horse in the background the implication is kind of...

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    Her entire face is lifted too much, especially the eye brows and eyes. Lower them, because the way you have them now, she looks like she got a really really bad face lift and other plastic surgery.

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    She has a very thin frame and huge breasts. Sure, there are women looking like that but in this case it gets a bit weird. If you're aiming for a boob-shot, you got it.

    And, talking about her breasts, her right looks like a cup and her left like a sagging balloon filled with water. Perhaps you could try to imagine how her nipples relate to each other to give her right breast a more symmetrical look.

    Her left hand looks oh so thin, but again, that's perhaps a very conscious stilistic thing.

    Try to get her feet to dig into the straw that covers the floor.

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    I did a little paintover because I am terrible at explaining things.

    If you bend your torso in one direction the other side becomes straighter.

    I also thought that it looked odd and stiff that her shoulder was slanted in the same direction as her hips. It would look more natural with a classic contrapost like this. Naturally the breasts would follow the lines of the shoulders.

    About the head and face. It looks odd because the hair is to small.

    I hope this helps and that you understand my ramblings.

    Maybe she should have some more Cowboy attributes. Definately a pair of boots. A stable is not a very good place to be barefoot.

    I like the background and the colours.

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