hi, this is a concept sketch over at the "newborn" contest . i'm trying to explore the concept of humanity reborn after some kind of armageddon. its supposed to capture the moment of humans on space resort watching the war back home.
i know the story isnt really understood and i dont know exactly what to do to get it more clear while keeping the same composition more or less. i know the focus is on the background which is distracting from the main subject which is the humans. i thought the contrast of action between the foreground and background will be a good idea but i dont think its doing anything storywise.
any recommendations will be helpful.