This is interesting.
Keep working on it for sure, the face is coming along really well. Also the breasts. I like crossed hands too. I do think the whole character still needs alot more definition, it looks rather misty or soft in some places. Make the edges sharp against the backround to really make the character stand out. Also watch how her left (our right) boob and elbow work anatomically. The lower body has very nice texture I think.
Also big thanks for dropping by my SB for that great advice, you have good eye for composition.
Mateja; I am so proud hearing such an encouraging words from a
pro artist like you are. I am motivated for like a next month now.
Thank you very much.
Danny K; Big Melons, yeeeah, I like them,
I will put an extra rendering attention to the nipples also,
do not worry, I know that is important also on this scenery.
Thank you very much for your support, I am glad to have
you in my company. I will surely keep visiting your sketchbook
and help you out with something if I ever can.
Rotor; hello my good friend, I always cheer up when I
see your comment in my sketchbook. I realize all what you
are saying about her softness and about the sharper edges,
I am working on it, plus I will increase the contrast, and
make her pop out even more from the background.
I am also trying to put some textures on her and use
brushes like I
did not used before on any on my
Thank you for your support, please come by
and share more of your thoughts with me anytime,
cause I feel that you could help me a lot.
About me posting in your sketchbook last time:
No problem, I was glad to review your last
, happy that you got some use
out of my rants and painting.
macimovic; hello again.
Happy to see you here.
I am more than satisfied if you
liked at least ten percent of my
Please come by any time,
in the future,
my workshop is always open for you.
a little more work on the huge breasted honey,
putting on some details,
using various brushes,
increasing/decreasing contrast on certain places,
and experimenting with color combinations
and the darkness of the ambient....
Also I was working on the hands and on the fingers...
By the way, this pose and body type is totally referenced.
The things that I changed are:
her skin color, tone and texture,
and I changed a little bit her face expression.
Soon will be over,
Soon I am posting the final version
I hope so....
Thank you all for your support,
Big thanks for all who views and
comments my art;
you are the ones who keeps me going on...
Naidy; glad to see you, thank your for the encouraging words.
I like to imagine here in those sweet moments of suffering as her huge
breasts torture her spinal column.
matej; hello, yes it passed some time since I saw you here.
Glad that you are back, hope that you will stay.
Thank you for the kind words.
Howitzer; thank you very much, I appreciate your visit to my sketchbook.
Nooooow..... here is the final version.
I am done with this project, and I am satisfied.
What's next? I am not sure.
I will dedicate my time to anatomy and life studies, try
to improve my skills even more, in the goal of
presenting my ideas to others on a more realistic and more
likeable way. I hope that I will succeed and I look forth for this
She is spending the worst moments of her life. She suffered too much.
Lucy never made out much of her life. She got pregnant as a teenager,
and her drunk psycho husband left her alone, after the birth of their second
child, beating her up brutally and raping her anally.
She never got a real job, she was always a lower class, always broke and
without any future. Her trials to get a better position in the social structure was in vain,
she sucked too many cocks and satisfied too many prominent
gentleman's in that goal, but with no result.
Because of her huge breasts, she was a great subject for stuffing, but
no one wanted to get involved with her on a longer run because of her
children. She was a reject, with no money, a huge titted fuckdoll without any brain.
After a filthy, dirty and unmoral fuck, her fat, smelly boss left the dirty hotel
room and she has been left alone crying in the darkness of her hell, wondering what
she will gonna do next.
Last edited by LtPlissken; October 22nd, 2010 at 04:40 PM.
As far as your pencil work goes, one of the major things I see that rubs me a bit the wrong way, is that your shading seems to follow your contour lines. This makes everything look a bit bloated to me, and i think perhaps try shading no only with the thought of the shape of the object, but how the shadow itself should appear....sorry if it all sounds like rubbish, but it's hard for me to explain :CCCCCCCC Hope it helps rather than confuses you !
The textures you got down well. But I find that application too soon to be applied.
In terms of shadow there is no hardcore shades found in there and there should be even if its round like the sphere exercise.
The application of your stroke are very hesitant I would try turning your opacity up and test bold strokes.
Anatomy seems off. Even with her weight you should still be able to see her clavicle. Maybe it dont show in your preference picture but we as artists had the disadvantage of drawing 3d subject matter on 2d plane, so more information helps.
Fuck yeah bro! Your really pulling things together! Looking great, keep the progress up!
Originally Posted by gutss
yesterday, God came to me in a dream and told me that if I don't become a comic book artist, he has decreed that I shall instead be a burlesque dancer.
And I said, "But God, nice panties are so expensive!"
And he said, "Welp, I suppose you better shut up and draw."
her story is so sad, I almost burst into tears ;-D in my opinion, it should be filmed!!
i like the multitude of details, especially her round head with the big tear in the middle. the wallpaper in the background is also nice!
Kurt Russel is a badass, and so are you. You were not in big trouble in little china so you are maybe not quite so much of a badass, but you're getting there.
This picture makes me smile. One thing that i might suggest is keeping the same level of harcore dark shading in all areas of the woman, or lighten up the areas of her body that you shaded really dark. One or the other. If it's alright with you, I red circled the areas that I feel could use a little more definition considering her lightsource. I also highly agree with what Koronno said.
I looked through all your sketchbook and you obviously made a great progress, especially with colours. I like how you painted the skin on that last woman
I agree with the others about anatomy though, her neck could you some more work.