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    Art dump: work in progress

    Here are two pieces which have to be finsihed yet.

    The first one is a person with two sides, the left is more evil, the right is the normal side. The second drawing is about a sad woman in tears, but i still have to draw the tears.
    My main goal is to draw as realistic as possible.

    Hope to get some comments

    Greetz Max4d





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    You might consider exaggerating the features on the first one a little more, really emphasize the evil, yes? Right now he just looks a little confused. Maybe do something with the mouth (make it bigger on his right side?)

    There is an all too common error in the proportions of the woman, her brain case is far too small, extend that puppy out of the edge of the page and you'll be fine!

    [Edit] Actually it's not *that* far off, but it's a little too small.

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    two other works







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    woah u have a really nice depth to these, post more im enjoying em

    hmm maybe using darker darks could help them pop even more,
    try a couple with an emphasis on the really darker dark side as of right now theres a nice midrange going on and your doing great with it but i think your scared of really pushing it. try it might be liberrating heh

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    sketchbook- http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=61756
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    You're great with shading, and you know the anatomy (even if you're just making it up, it looks right). The only suggestions I have are the facial proportions. Your eyes in all of the pieces are too small for the face, and it throws everything else off. I don't know a website or book offhand that could tell you this, but should study a face and see if you can find a common measure on the face to guide where the other parts may go. IE, your eyes should have an apprx. eye distance between them, and, facing down and inwards with the eye should form a triangle pointing to where the tip of the nose is.

    Keep it up.

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