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    Web site work

    So I decided to put a site together showcasing my works. Took me about 3 hours to slap together from nothin. Any criticisms and compliments are welcome! Thanks in advance!

    http://www.arleah.com/JarwaStudios/index.htm

    So, in addition to my site... here's a picture
    Web site work
    Last edited by shadyj129; December 29th, 2003 at 06:57 AM.
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    umm...this should probably go into the links section
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    Here or not.

    Originally posted by Carnifex
    umm...this should probably go into the links section
    Well, I'm fairly new to these boards, and none of the topics say that this would be long in a particular place. I figured this would be appropriate being it's still design work that is finally finished.
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    The site looks good! Easy to navigate and find stuff. Good job!
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    Nice site but y'know Carnifex is right.

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    Originally posted by darkcult
    Nice site but y'know Carnifex is right.
    Well, considering it must be quite obvious I don't know being I posted it here, it would be nice if someone would specifically point me in the right direction to where this "should" be posted.
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    u can post ur link here.. but be sure to directly post ur new stuff on a thread...

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    Well, there is a thread stuck at the top of the Finally Finished section that's pretty hard to miss that says:

    RULE: New threads MUST INCLUDE PICTURE.

    So if you edit your first post in this thread, and include one of the pictures from your site, then this post would be good to stay.

    lots of decent sketches and Illos on your site. the main thing I noticed was the upper leg tends to be a bit long, and the lower leg too short. Also, the shading on the bodies could use higher contrast to give them 3 dimensional form and structure.

    The very light shading on the bodies, coupled with the high contrasts in the costume tend to make the drawings look flat (in the pencil sketches). The shadows on the body, especially where there is little light, like under a helmet or the shadow cast by clothing, really needs to be pushed more I think.

    I won't comment on the color, because I really haven't done any reading or experimenting with color yet.


    Last edited by adien; December 29th, 2003 at 04:34 AM.

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