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May 26th, 2009 #1
The Annual Meeting
Would like some criticisms on that piece. Thank you very much.
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nice work, keep going.
May 26th, 2009 #3
With the brush you're using the edges of the clouds look like they're made of threads, which really gets in the way of them looking like clouds. You need to fix that.
May 26th, 2009 #4
The dome/building seems to be lopsided, like it's tipping to the bottom left corner.
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May 26th, 2009 #5
I think the perspective is slightly off to. I believe with the angle you are looking down on the dome the horizon should be lifted up quite a large amount. There is also allot of empty space in the canvas. Do you plan on adding more buildings ?
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May 27th, 2009 #6
First thing I thought was 'where's that guy gonna park?' cause I don't see a landing pad or area for him to touch down and walk in to meet his fellows (and he's late, to boot) As for the tower, the perspective is wonky as far as how the supporting struts are drawn and how their shadows fall inside the dome. If you also push the details and put some shine on the windows, it'll start looking sharp! The clouds in the upper half look great--so does the sunset and how the color reflects off the cloud's undersides. I'm not so sure I like the clouds in the foreground 'hiding' the tower's columns though. It makes me think of people drawing hands in pockets to avoid drawing them outright.
May 27th, 2009 #7
This is what ive been able to do so far. Thank you for your helpful criticisms. I appreciate.
May 27th, 2009 #8