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    Smile A guy with its paperbag !

    Hello everyone :]

    first of all, i'm french and my english suck a lot...sorry about that

    erm...i dare post my things here, because i'm trying to learn by myself how to paint and i'm feeling stuck, without making any progress :/

    so i take all the courage i can find and post here, trying to go forward.

    Oh ! before i forgot ( how can i dare forgot that !) i'm searching a mentor for help me in environments, color theory and composition ! please i need some help !

    Have a nice day !

    let's go for the show :

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    Hey man! Great start here^^ Keep up the good work, and try to challenge yourself to do something a bit different as well

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    Wow, some pretty interesting post-apocalyptic environments. Though some can come across slightly confusing, especially the last one. Pick the direction the light source is coming from, and increase the contrasts, to make the image slightly more eye-catching. The best here compositionally is the second to last piece (the delapidated building), which is a great angle and the use of colour works.

    Anyway good luck, and keep it up. (Also check out the golden section)

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    Oh comments ! thank you :]

    @Mischeviouslittleelf : thank you for your kind words :] i will try to challenge myself as you say, hope i can success

    @kagemusha22 : thank you for your advices i'll follow them !

    And for not posting an empty message (eviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiil) i give some pieces of sketchpad

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    What a great start! Very imaginative environments, keep it up!

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    WIP !

    @ Pixie : Thanks for your comment, its really motivating :] i love doing environments, i dont know why, its make me dreaming !

    soooo, what about a picture ? mmm some kind of quick WIP with (oh no again !) vegetation, i've tried to work on the lights here, but i need more practice.

    i'll try to use the golden section in this one like kagemusha said, but i dont really know how yet :p

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    Update on the previous WIP , i hope you like it

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    WOW really AMAZING paintings !!!! AN YOUR LINE WORK ROCKS!!!!!

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    badass line work!
    So much detail it's so awesome.
    Really loving all the stuff going on in the pencil/pen drawings
    sweet concepts too
    keep at it

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    I love the jungle-covered buildings.

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    woaw comments

    Grandmassa: thank you man i love draw with pen/pencil too, but i think i suck more at this.

    Lilnebo: Thanks too detailling a picture is fun thing to do

    Strela: yeah i love jungle too and the thing i really love, is jungle covered old smashed buildings

    and for you yes because i love you all some scribbles

    ps: eeeerm i got a noobish question *erm* i'd like to add a thumb to my thread i've searched a bit but didn't find how to add one, can somebody help me please ?

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    Hi!! Great thread man. Awesome works. I love your jungle themes and jungle characters.

    But, to answer your question. (I am assuming you wanted to add a thumb to this thread post for anybody in the sketchbook lounge can see it)

    1. You will have to go all the way to the first post and click on edit
    2. Then click Go Advance
    3. Manage Attachments
    4. Now you have to get rid of all the pictures here and just post one pic. You can always edit your second post with all the pics that you removed from the first post (or you can add them wherever).

    Hope that helps

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    Thanks for stopping by my SB and commenting and yay!!! I am so glad that you like it!!

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    I would really love some honest critiques and improvements suggestions

    Renewed Study - I'm drawing again!!
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    Ta presentation de vegetation est superbe! C'est plutot rare de voir quelqu'un mettre l' emphase sur ca et donc ca te donne une signature deja. Par contre, tes environments sont plutot surchargees. Si tu pouvais balancer le detail avec des endroits plus simples dans tes compositions et checher un point vers lequel attirer le regard du spectateur. Celle-ci contre cette piece illustre mon idee. Continue le bon travail, tres cool!

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    nice work man! a thought would be to throw some more open spaces to ur compositions to complement the insane details! keep em coming man.

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    i want more

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    cool you vegetables!!!!!

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