I bought a Bamboo Fun tablet and this is my first try out with that.
not often the case where you see too much contrast, but here I think thats a problem. more detail in the shadows less black. Also think about adding some color tints to make the subject matter stand out.
hope this helps!
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Very nice for a first attempt, really!
What would help to sell the "underwater" effect is a proper lighting setup. Naturally the light would com from above (and maybe from the ground in form of bounced light).
I also agree with zedkhov about the contrast thing although it can get quite dark down there.
Thanks zedkhov and Tugelbend for yor respons. I will read up on the lightning setup for underwater scenary. Good idea. About detail in the shadow i donīt now if that so good . I donīt want to distract the viewer from the focus on the face.
I agree that that the picture need some more color. Iīm not soo good with color but iīm reading up on that.