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May 14th, 2009 #1
This is my first attempt at a more realistic face using lots of different reference of girls, but not sticking to any one specifically. After hours of trying to make it look even human , I don't really feel like I'm getting any impact from the face. I was going for just a calm expression but I think it's a little boring so I'm open to suggestions. I still want to aim for a more subtle expression but she's looking a little too "soul-less" right now.
I'm also at a quandary as to what her hands should be doing, I guess I could have her holding a tea cup or something...I don't know.
Anyway, I keep feeling like my artwork is lacking in "life" and tends too feel stiff and slapped on the canvas - I'd love to be able to give that feeling of capturing a moment in time but my pieces keep looking flat. I've been trying to solve this but I'm still stumped so any critique or impressions you have would be greatly appreciated.
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It may be feeling "lifeless" because the skin looks a bit pale, and the lighting is neutral. The skin can be excused, considering the character, but the lighting could be focused on. Right now, there's no set light source; Define that first and it'll look much better already. To add to it, light has temperature: a warm light is more orange, a cold light is more blue or teal. You'll probably want a cold light in this picture, so perhaps have some subtle blue on her face and outfit in the direction of the light?
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May 14th, 2009 #3
Awesome, thanks! I guess after using all that mixed reference, I totally eliminated the light source ^^; I'll go back and rework it with some cold lighting
May 14th, 2009 #4
-started adding cools and worked on the realism a bit more, this is fun
I've got some finals to study for so this is it for tonight even though I really don't want to stop ^^
May 14th, 2009 #5
Is really a great improvement from the rpevious step Keep it up after the finals気計 - Quike
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May 16th, 2009 #6
Got a break between finals to work on this more. I'm still playing around with the face but I thought it would probably work better with the full figure in the composition, I'm not sure how big I should make my canvas though - any thoughts? Background-wise, I wasn't going to do much but I'm open to suggestions on that as well ^^
Anyway, free free to fire away any critiques you have, I'm still trying to develop my style and I haven't really done much digital painting so anything helps
Quikenobi - thanks! I will ^^
May 16th, 2009 #7
worked on it a bit more...off to sleep now ^^
-wow, I just realized the left eye's iris is a totally different size, I'll fix that in the morning ^^;
May 16th, 2009 #8
not much to add, just giving an ass pat! that last version is looking amazing
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