The pacing is a little slow at times but overall good job for a first ainmation! Reminds me of that animation on the military industrial complex..
I like these kind of films that make people aware.. animation is a very good tool for conveyeing a message like this. I dont think the music fits though.. or its is the general pacing indeed.
yeh whats the name of that industrial complex animation? i wanted to talk about it in one of my classes at school, but now I cant find it.
"What Barry Says" ~2003 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tmP8Bgof6KE