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    Girl with cookies

    It's a girl with an EGL inspired dress, and a pan full of cookies. The lace needs work, as does the face. I think I need to bring the head down a little, too much neck is exposed. The lines around the bow are too sketchy, and probably need to be cleaned up a lot more, given more definition and what not.

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    Hello and welcome on CA
    I thought I'd attempt to give you a critique. Although I see nothing wrong with the pose of the character, I think the limbs' proportions are off, mainly the arms'. The torso may be too thin too, and I believe the face could use some work, unless you're aiming for a very anime-looking face, I'm not sure. I like your shading though (I couldn't shade to save my life).
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    Thank you ever so much for your critique. Yes, the arms are too long, I tend to mess those up a lot because my arms are also too long in real life, so I forget to match the proportions of normal humans.
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    Actually, I had the feeling the arms were too short compared to the legs. Or maybe the legs are too long compared to the arms, I'm not sure.
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