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    Wip update 27 4 2009

    How can I improve my picture? What can I do to feel deep in my picture? that figure seems more in 3d, thanks

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    Some proportions are off, most noticeably the forehead shape and the size of the hair. I think you're going for realistic, so you should fix that. The "lean" should also be a little more to our right, and her hips could be turned a bit.

    You can gain depth with a variety of techniques, which shouldn't be too hard to find in certain tutorials.

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    Exaggerate the lighting contrast if you want to push a three dimensional feel.

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    Wip 25 4 2009

    Thanks guys. This is all I could do to improve it. If you see any errors let me try it and improve it. What could I do now for my picture to see more professional?

    P.D. sorry for my bad english

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    It is pretty good and I like the beautiful color >.<

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    What can I do now to make my drawing look better? Do you think there is an error in my drawing? if so, say. Thanks all

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