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    Jeff Johnson



    Please, take a look at this robust man. His name is Jeff Johnson. But you can call him “overheat”. Back in 2079 he was one of the most famous IBF heavyweight champions of the world. But then he had a heart-attack during his boxing match. The doctors’ verdict was : “No more boxing”. So he used to get himself a new heart. His new organ is much better then previous. His new heart is able to pump over 15 litres of blood per minute. He is able to go through almost 25 rounds in turn. But there is no place for freaks like him in professional boxing. He had found his new home among numerous underground fighting clubs.

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    This is good stuff, I like the description a lot. There are a few anatomy issues which are complicated by the stylized line weights. I like the linework but it doesn't help his right(our left) delt and bicep, forearm. Also the calves are off a little and the brow, nothing too serious. The shadow of the neck is overdone although maybe the arteries enter there. Either way we would catch a little light on the sides, the center of the chest is a little too much as well.

    I'm not sure that the folds are helping, it's probably best to simplify those to avoid detraction, but these are all just nit-picks. I would like to see it colored if you are going in that direction. Good work man.

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    ^what collywobbles mentions.

    It helps to flip the image, digitally or with a mirror to check for proportions.
    His right arm and right leg could be moved closer to the body, both
    evident in the flipping.

    That is steam coming off of his body right?

    Godd stuff.

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    OK, thanks for critique... going to work further...

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