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April 13th, 2009 #1
Eric's Sketchbook (Updated 11/03/2010)
Hello, I made an account here a long time ago, but I was never really around. Anyways, i decided to start up a sketchbook here. My story: I'm 21, 3rd year majoring in Art Studio. I was started out as Computer science and engineering major, switched to art sophomore year. I've been painting for maybe about 2 years. I think i want to get into concept art.
I want critiques, critiques and more critiques. PLEASE RIP THEM APART!!! Any comments regarding concept art are also welcome.
I also keep an art blog at artoferichu.com, please check it out!
I'm starting out with some of my most recent works. Thank you all for looking and i hope you enjoy my art! REMEMBER TO CRITIQUE!
Last edited by Rinthe; December 3rd, 2010 at 07:33 AM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberApril 15th, 2009 #2
some face study
April 15th, 2009 #3
The first one has potential to be a breath taking environment. It needs more time to form, more days of accumulating painting. The second one is an interesting concept but her skeletal, stringy body, vaguely drawn facial features and smile seem irregular to the scene. I feel like a vacant expression from a pretty woman would be a lot more effective in both the conceptual sense and the execution sense. As is, this curious lady in a red dress looks like a drunk woman dancing for her husband, who took this picture.
I'd like to see what you turn this into. I hope any comments have helped, sorry if I crossed any lines in my criticism.
Keep doing you
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April 18th, 2009 #4
Vulgar': I think you're right about both! I think I will work on the first one more. thanks for the critique!
April 19th, 2009 #5
I love that you're doing these quick b&w digital studies of people around you. You might try including a block-in of the shapes and values behind the figures. Its very difficult to judge the values on the figures against solid white. Keep it up!
April 22nd, 2009 #6
So i worked more on this painting
April 23rd, 2009 #7
one more for the night
April 23rd, 2009 #8
April 23rd, 2009 #9
Janos: you're right about the faces, i gotta work on that.
April 27th, 2009 #10
some head study
April 30th, 2009 #11
need more time to paint.
May 2nd, 2009 #12
im sick of this. its done
May 3rd, 2009 #13
May 3rd, 2009 #14
I like your loose style a lot, that one with the barguy has a wierd angle but perhaps that is what makes me like it. Nice!
May 7th, 2009 #15
i reworked my dancer painting
May 17th, 2009 #16
my god this is horrible... crit?
May 20th, 2009 #17
May 21st, 2009 #18
June 15th, 2009 #19
paintings done with mouse...
June 15th, 2009 #20
your studies are looking great-- in some of your drawings your people have very stiff arms,maybe practice some gestural sketches of arms+arm movement
June 30th, 2009 #21
November 3rd, 2010 #22
It's been awhile. some of my recent sketches. check out my <a href="http://artfoerichu.com/">portfolio</a> for more.