The first one has potential to be a breath taking environment. It needs more time to form, more days of accumulating painting. The second one is an interesting concept but her skeletal, stringy body, vaguely drawn facial features and smile seem irregular to the scene. I feel like a vacant expression from a pretty woman would be a lot more effective in both the conceptual sense and the execution sense. As is, this curious lady in a red dress looks like a drunk woman dancing for her husband, who took this picture.
I'd like to see what you turn this into. I hope any comments have helped, sorry if I crossed any lines in my criticism.
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New World Creation: Designers Wanted – Environment of the Week