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    i dont play in your league... lol so my critic is just this... AWASOME!

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    Thanks everybody! Sorry about the slow month!

    Here's the bull thing:



    Now to draw the back side!

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    You're so diverse! I love the lighting on that piece up there ^ great rendering!

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    Steady improvement, brah. Looking great.

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    Wow your renders are really well done!

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    Hey Ian!

    Your stuff looks better and better from each post. Keep it up.
    Even though your last self-portrait is still a WIP, I would suggest to change the background color.
    Right now the black works like a completely white canvas, so you see the colors too saturated.
    Try to change it to a low contrasted brown or so.

    Anyways, I hope I could help.

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    thanks! yeah still not sure what i'll do with the background but i'll play around

    here is the start of a character layout:



    I drew this character a while ago as the main character of a big story... I still like the story but I wanted to update him. This is from 2 years ago: http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/...GideonChar.jpg Boy I hope I've progressed enough in that time :<

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ian Barker View Post
    Thanks everybody! Sorry about the slow month!

    Here's the bull thing:





    Now to draw the back side!
    hey man, looks awesome and really clean, done in ps?

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    Hey Ian,

    Nice stuff you have here! Love the bug guy and the bull thing, your more graphic characters are also looking good. Question: did you use the lasso tool to make the armor on the bull thing piece?

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    Hello Ian, you have got a very nice sketchbook here. nice study of self portrait on the bus, really captured the reflection and the light very well. The rendering on the bull thing looks very professional.

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    Love your style. Haven't checked through the entire thread, will do tomorrow. How does one subscribe to threads? I must check that tomorrow as well. Now it's time to go to bed.


    HaHA! Thanks to another member I could subscribe.

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    Tea: Thanks No, that was all just brushes. I usually over-paint with my brush and then use a hard eraser to cut away and leave it looking clean.
    Hyunjae: thanks much!
    Polly: It's up there in the thread tools, and you can go under Quick Links at the top to get to your threads. thank you a bunch! Hopefully will have lots of updates for you in the future

    Made a few changes to that last thing:



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    Amazing improvement man, keep working...

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    Looking good man, i'd say buff the darkness in your crevice shadows even more to make them really read.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ian Barker View Post
    Made this really crude test animation today:

    This makes me want to try my hand at animating too! What did you use to make this?

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    I agree with Ludic, it looks like you´re focusing more on hue and saturation, but if you really want the forms to read, value is the most important. ( Like you did on the bull thing!)
    Also, on the self portrait, the eyes doesn´t line up in perspective with the center line, maybe some planar studies? The screen left eye is bigger and seems to be a bit big, and i think the nose ridge should cover more of the screen right eye.
    Keep it up, man!

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    Thanks Alrap
    Ludic, Flaskpost, many thanks for the crits, I'll take them into account
    necroidus that was made just in photoshop using 'timeline". was pretty fun!

    Just wanted to post to let you all know that I'm going away for Christmas and there won't be any new posts for a few weeks but hopefully when I get back i'll have some sketches to show

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    Back from Christmas break

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    One hour sketch:


    WIP, crit would be lovely :


    I'll have some more once I have a chance to scan my sketchbooks

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    Hey, great stuff. I love how solid your mech-ish work looks, and that self-portrait has some really nice colours.

    Crit on that last WIP - the left shoulder and right arm are off; the shoulder's too far out from her body and the arm is just bent at a really uncomfortable angle. Quick drawover:



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    That demon robot you did was fucking badass! Oh, and I also liked that woman in the claw armor.

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    Thanks very much Rev, great advice, I'll change that part
    Thanks FightingSeraph, appreciate it!

    update on character from earlier:



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    I like the vibrant colors you use

    nice self-portrait, like how you painted the hair, very brushy, well done

    how did you make that bull creature so 3d? wow

    also liked that balloon guy you did

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    Thanks the 3dish look just took a lot of passes and layers... I've been considering making tutorial videos, maybe I'll do one on that.. though I don't feel professional enough to be making videos, lol

    Here's the previous fellow updated The vest is part of his armor, he wears other layers on top which I'll design later. But the vest is the only part that looks ok for him to wear casually



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