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April 11th, 2009 #1
My Gas Chamber (nudity, portraits and some fails)
Critics and comments will be great, you can be even cruel, i don't care!
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oK, here 's some sketchs, done without reference
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oK, here is a sketch, and then the inked version, i used my living room center desk as a light table, lol
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Ok, here's some traditional stuff, done more than a year ago while i was in love with her.
April 11th, 2009 #10
welcome! Scary username, though!
Your figures from imagination are good, you're not shy creating dynamic poses.
Here's some crits:
There's some anatomy and proportion issues, specially with how the legs look too straight in your first drawing and how you tend to taper them too much at the ankles. You might want to stylise your characters that way, but at this point it looks more like a mistake than style. Perhaps because it's not very consistent? Maybe I'm wrong.
Superman looks like he has a double chin, but he's otherwise the expected well muscled character we know. So I suggest you draw his square jaw all around, not just the chin.
You're right your drawings do look better in pencil, and that's because you manage to create line variation in them. You might try that with your inking too. Not too much, because the thin line is interesting. What are you using for inking?
April 11th, 2009 #11
i'm awaer of th leg thing, i know that is straight, i'm kinda like doing then that way, same on the double chin, most of my inspiration comes from tim sale, and i think that i'm absorving TOO much from him, this is something taht really annoys me, i have to find my own style.
I'll try to do some better inking, i can really do line vcariation with ink, i'm to afraid of missing and have to start all over again (*hit head on the wall*)
i'm using staedler ink pens, number 0,1 and 0.8, and for red lines a pigma micron pen
thanks again for taking time into this commment
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