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    My Gas Chamber (nudity, portraits and some fails)

    Critics and comments will be great, you can be even cruel, i don't care!
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    oK, here 's some sketchs, done without reference
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    some more!

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    I like your style, the women look very feminine (last one's my favorite).

    Do you do any of them in ink?
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    oK, here is a sketch, and then the inked version, i used my living room center desk as a light table, lol
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    Quote Originally Posted by crashMMVII View Post
    I like your style, the women look very feminine (last one's my favorite).

    Do you do any of them in ink?
    I have some of then on ink, i will upload then later, but i really prefer then on pencils, i kinda suck at inking
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    Nice start, love the face on superman, keep them coming.
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    Quote Originally Posted by [ste] View Post
    Nice start, love the face on superman, keep them coming.
    Thanks man! I have a LOT of stuff to scan and post here, so stay tuned
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    Ok, here's some traditional stuff, done more than a year ago while i was in love with her.
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    welcome! Scary username, though!

    Your figures from imagination are good, you're not shy creating dynamic poses.

    Here's some crits:

    There's some anatomy and proportion issues, specially with how the legs look too straight in your first drawing and how you tend to taper them too much at the ankles. You might want to stylise your characters that way, but at this point it looks more like a mistake than style. Perhaps because it's not very consistent? Maybe I'm wrong.

    Superman looks like he has a double chin, but he's otherwise the expected well muscled character we know. So I suggest you draw his square jaw all around, not just the chin.

    You're right your drawings do look better in pencil, and that's because you manage to create line variation in them. You might try that with your inking too. Not too much, because the thin line is interesting. What are you using for inking?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Leonor View Post
    welcome! Scary username, though!

    Your figures from imagination are good, you're not shy creating dynamic poses.

    Here's some crits:

    There's some anatomy and proportion issues, specially with how the legs look too straight in your first drawing and how you tend to taper them too much at the ankles. You might want to stylise your characters that way, but at this point it looks more like a mistake than style. Perhaps because it's not very consistent? Maybe I'm wrong.

    Superman looks like he has a double chin, but he's otherwise the expected well muscled character we know. So I suggest you draw his square jaw all around, not just the chin.

    You're right your drawings do look better in pencil, and that's because you manage to create line variation in them. You might try that with your inking too. Not too much, because the thin line is interesting. What are you using for inking?
    Thanks for stoping by! It's always great to have some critics!

    i'm awaer of th leg thing, i know that is straight, i'm kinda like doing then that way, same on the double chin, most of my inspiration comes from tim sale, and i think that i'm absorving TOO much from him, this is something taht really annoys me, i have to find my own style.

    I'll try to do some better inking, i can really do line vcariation with ink, i'm to afraid of missing and have to start all over again (*hit head on the wall*)

    i'm using staedler ink pens, number 0,1 and 0.8, and for red lines a pigma micron pen

    thanks again for taking time into this commment
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    you're good at proportions. You need to knuckle down on some anatomy studies, draw from life, and try as many different media as possible . I loved the stockings, very striking and very graphic.
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    Firts try ever with pastels, i don't really liked =\
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