my first post here on concept art!
I've been working on this one and now I'm kinda stuck and bored about it, guess that's what happen when you don't plan ahead
so give it a look, write what you think about it, criticism is welcome!
Hey , this is really my first time critiqueing an art piece , but I'll give it a try.
1. her lips make her look vampire-ish. I thought she had fangs at the start.
2. Her hair looks very flat and lacks dimension
3. her skin could be whiter to make it apparent that she is a geisha
4. she seems to have no ears
5. her kimono doesnt look like a kimono , which are usually wrapped around a person.
However the piece is actually really good. Her face is pretty and her eyes are really intense and well drawn. With a few changes you could make this a great drawing.