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    Wips

    2 wips./....one is a flyer ...
    other is queen's escort on chow...although i think its closed i thought i'd ahve a go at it..

    so.....what do i need to chop and cut...?


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    I like the contrast of the teen escape poster. But a lot of detail is missing? I rather have the person looking straight a head at the viewer. I'm not sure why the wings are spread flat out perfectly. Since they are connected to the shoulders and his body is at a 2/3d's view.
    Make a sketchbook happy, feed it a tip to improve!

    http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=85628

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    Criticism

    Wow - you have a really great sense of design! I'd like to see you get bolder with the facial features... they seem really flat against the face.

    Show us more!

    - Joshua LaBello

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