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Thread: Sneak Peak... literally
March 8th, 2009 #14
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Here eyes look a bit misplaced.. I really like the pose ..
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March 9th, 2009 #16
Pretty cool, I dig the illumination and the pose but I'd reconsider her physiognomy, there's something about the eyes/nose/mouth that doesn't feel quite right...Hope this helps, I'm looking forward to see the progress.
March 9th, 2009 #17
thanks guys, guess I'm gonna lay this aside since you said the whole face is quite off...gonna work it out some other day
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Your anatomy is nice. As I'm still in the process of learning to do a REALLY good dynamic figure myself, I can't say that I'm in a position to give full critique, but the lines and figure are very graceful. The thumbnail doesn't do this justice.
March 14th, 2009 #19
March 14th, 2009 #20
My only crit... What IS that? It looks like a stray mark.
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March 14th, 2009 #21
March 15th, 2009 #22
I think the reason the eyes seem a little off is that they angle downwards perhaps just a little to much and the right eye could move up and towards the centre just a tad.
I think its looking dam good. Keep going on it or if you are going to lay it down as you said dont leave it for long, maybe a day or two.
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