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    hey its just an idea but what if you expanded the canvus a bit more on our left you could put in a rug or some thing it just seems like she is cuting the pic in half the extra empty space might help to balance it

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    Here eyes look a bit misplaced.. I really like the pose ..

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    Pretty cool, I dig the illumination and the pose but I'd reconsider her physiognomy, there's something about the eyes/nose/mouth that doesn't feel quite right...Hope this helps, I'm looking forward to see the progress.

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    thanks guys, guess I'm gonna lay this aside since you said the whole face is quite off...gonna work it out some other day

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    thanks" yea, I plan to create a really interesting well rendered ancient dagger
    This is just a small thing, but just for the sake of practicality, her dagger may be "backwards". Then again, she could as well be going for a stab in the back and... well, I dunno. *chuckles* I guess I'm just pointing out that if she's going to be delivering more than one blow, she might turn the dagger the opposite direction. Mostly a future reference kind of thing, because a lot of fantasy nuts would notice something like "Wow, it must be inconvenient to fight with the dagger in that position." Then again, maybe you are one, and you know precisely what you're doing... you tell me.

    Your anatomy is nice. As I'm still in the process of learning to do a REALLY good dynamic figure myself, I can't say that I'm in a position to give full critique, but the lines and figure are very graceful. The thumbnail doesn't do this justice.

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    The thumbnail doesn't do this justice.
    don't get that part, you mean the color version ruined the lines?

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    My only crit... What IS that? It looks like a stray mark.

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    haha cool that's the rimlight like on her back from the moon reflection outside

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    I think the reason the eyes seem a little off is that they angle downwards perhaps just a little to much and the right eye could move up and towards the centre just a tad.

    I think its looking dam good. Keep going on it or if you are going to lay it down as you said dont leave it for long, maybe a day or two.

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