hey its just an idea but what if you expanded the canvus a bit more on our left you could put in a rug or some thing it just seems like she is cuting the pic in half the extra empty space might help to balance it
Here eyes look a bit misplaced.. I really like the pose ..
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Pretty cool, I dig the illumination and the pose but I'd reconsider her physiognomy, there's something about the eyes/nose/mouth that doesn't feel quite right...Hope this helps, I'm looking forward to see the progress.
thanks guys, guess I'm gonna lay this aside since you said the whole face is quite off...gonna work it out some other day
Your anatomy is nice. As I'm still in the process of learning to do a REALLY good dynamic figure myself, I can't say that I'm in a position to give full critique, but the lines and figure are very graceful. The thumbnail doesn't do this justice.
My only crit... What IS that? It looks like a stray mark.
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I think the reason the eyes seem a little off is that they angle downwards perhaps just a little to much and the right eye could move up and towards the centre just a tad.
I think its looking dam good. Keep going on it or if you are going to lay it down as you said dont leave it for long, maybe a day or two.
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