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    some critique on this character?

    HI

    So i started this random character.... I know there's something odd with the face and the shoulder part of her jacket too...
    PLease halp O_O

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    The shoulder of the jacket looks sewn on oddly. That is, it appears almost like a cylinder robotically put on to the rest of the jacket; the ring that connects to the body is not curved towards the jacket itself. The pose also looks a bit unrelaxed, but I'll wait till the rock's finished to judge that. I can't find much wrong with the face, and your rendering is very nice.

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    the shoulder and jacket seem abit random but dam, those are very well rendered pants. i'd say work on your faces abit more if anything.

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