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    Unhappy Bruce needs to lose a few LBS...

    but where? and what is wrong with his eyes? what else is wrong for that matter?

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    looks like Bruce, even from the thumbnail!
    your proportions seem ok to me, but your details are a bit strange:
    The eyelashes, the eyebrows and the lipdetails make him look more feminine than he is.
    Just drop the eyelashes, make the eyebrows a bit fuzzier and lighter and add bags under his eyes and should get more likeness
    I just took a break to post this.
    But sometimes I also draw stuff

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    Bloody hell that has a lot of contrast!

    Is there a reason for you to work in such extreme gamuts so early? Pure Black and Pure White should be avoided until the end of a piece, and even then only on particular areas. BUT if this painting is for a specific style, then maybe the proportions and distribution of value just needs readjusting.

    As for the eyes (sorry for the shitty edit, i used my trackpad):

    Bruce needs to lose a few LBS...

    (I think I went a little far with the eye, but you get the drift.)

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