took a bunch of recent sketches an an mak'n soup gunna add some salt an BAM' hope it works out what'cha think
i understand that you put this together with several different sketches. but if you mean to integrate them seamlessly, you might want to change the warm hues on the girl. theres so much greens and blues everywhere... except her.
Yeah, that's what jumps out to me the most. Her warm hues as opposed to the cool background. Working on that will help make it mesh a lot more than it does now.
Yeah, nearly. Look around her. LOTS of green and Blue. Our skin reflects colours from around us, I would assume she would have some reflecting from her skin. Have some kind of green rim light or something. Its hard to explain this shit without working on it myself.
But I think its a huge improvement, experiment with her skin a littl and show the results.
That looks REALLY nice! Much better pose overall. You could always try with an orange flame also just to check out which looks better. Seeing is always more powerful than thinking.
I think there 'might' be too much space to the right. Maybe you could play with the crop tool to see if taking some away would make it feel better.
Put a nice reflection on that water, would make the piece really interesting.
I think now that you have a torch you should darken some of the background with dark saturated blue, this would make her 'pop' from the background.