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    jpdelteso┤s SKETCHBOOK - Life drawings, works, studies...

    Hi everybody,

    My first post here. At the moment I┤m preparing myself to become an Illustrator/Draughtsman/Concept Artist... whatever I feel likely with during the long way, so I decided to post here and receive critics that could help me in improving my skills. Hope to learn a lot from this community and if possible to give back my 2 cents.

    So, no more talking. Here goes my first post:

    Life Drawings. 15 minutes each.

    At the moment I┤m trying to find flow in the figure while being accurate rendering shapes. Not aiming for mass drawing right now.

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    Welcome to CA!
    Good start you have here

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    Good stuff so far! Keep it coming.

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    Thanks for the warm welcome. I┤ll do my best to keep expectations high.

    So here goes something else. I think it would have needed some more contrast in some areas... but I had to move on!

    Watercolor pencils. Used photo reference.

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    ...and some more Life poses. 15 minutes poses.

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    hi jose, great to finally see you on here, there are so many brilliant people on this site with good advice.

    in regards to your life drawing you have certainly improved alot, all that hard work paying off eh? one thing i did notice is you are concerned with the contour rather than 2d shapes when drawing the figure. this gives them a very round feeling. as you know (im sure i told you this b4) there are only two types of line, straight lines and curved lines. straight lines make objects look solid, in the figure it is used to show where bones come to the surface and where the body contacts a surface it is resting on. curved lines give the drawing flow and can be used to show where there is pressure from squash and stretch.

    i think your over concern with contour is making you forget about flow. ive tried to represent eye flow in the image below, see how in your drawing your eye doesnt want to move down the body so much as scan across it awkwardly.

    notice as well the "sausage" shapes made from the flow of the legs because the apexes of the curves are directly across from each other. in the second image can you see the improvement i made by slightly shifting the apexes of the curves?

    really what you want to be doing is simplifying the body into 2d shapes that approximate the angle and direction that they travel in. this is what is matters. ive tried to show this in the overpainted photo, notice that i completly ignored the contour, using as few lines as possible to make my shapes(i used blue lines to close the shapes to make it clearer for you) really the only information that is copied from the photo into the red lines is the positions of the apexes of the curves and the general shape.

    well hope you find this helpful and ill talk to you soon

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    Hi mate!

    Glad you came here! Thanks a lot for taking the time to show me your explanations the way you┤ve done. Really helpful pointers. About flow, I agree with you; I should try to look more for it instead of giving priority to contour(already working on it). It┤s quite a bad habit I got. Getting into contour directly because of thinking that "I see it" is something I try to do no more. About simplification of shapes, also started to work it out. Maybe it┤s not that evident in the drawings I┤ve posted already, but is another "tool" I┤m trying to use.

    Will post more stuff during this week, soooooo... stay tuned!

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    Sepia watercolor (work in progress)

    It took me some more time than I thought to be back here, but it┤s been busy time.

    Anyway, here┤s some more work for my "color" class, still work in progress but no far from completion(or I hope so). Sepia Watercolor using photo reference. Critiques and comments are more than welcome.

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    hi jose

    that forest scene seems very busy, have another look at creative illustration, loomis talks about removing clutter and patchyness, simple compositions are always the best. again i have to ask why watercolor, it is a medium of masters, because only masters can use it properly, i remember you did quite well with the pastels or how about trying oil paint.

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    Hi again!

    Sorry about the late reply and for the lack of updates.

    About the forest scene being busy, sure, I agree with that. At that moment I was concentrating more on technique as well as in giving the branches natural and credible shapes. Creative Illustration it┤s not a re-read for me, but a first time read, I fear. I┤ve been mostly concerned with life figure drawing, so I left it apart with some other interesting readings.

    Again the watercolor thing...
    How dumb is to go that way for starting? Sure oil painting appeals me as well(maybe more indeed), but wanna be sure about going one direction or the other.

    Enough talking for now.

    Here goes some more life drawings; 15 minutes poses. I noticed some improvement in the flow of the figures, as well as in the simplifying of the shapes(Thanks for pointing that out, Mr.Rattsang!!) I┤ll try to add some more through this evening, including some interesting 2 and 5 minutes poses.

    Waiting for comments.

    Thanks in advance!

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    Some more 15 minutes life drawings. Done with col-erase and graphite pencils for improving cleanliness and line quality(just testing).

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    you have some nice studies.. though you should look into you proportions.
    But i guess you can notice that yourself to. Since i see you working hard on them.
    It must be a blast to be livedrawing,, never did that
    I will someday
    Good luck man! keep them sketches comming!

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    great model studies, don't be afraid to show alittle bit more dynamics and expression in your lines.

    Keep up the good work u are doing great

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