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    father.....update!!

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    I can't really figure out what the heck is going on here. much more definition and more solid shading needed.
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    holy $#!t that is friggn amazing are you done will you do more holy $#!t now i gotta start trying harder wow

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    I agree, I have absolutely no idea where one figure ends and where the other starts. It would help if they had two different colours.

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    i don't get it. ones pretty much a black sillihoute. and the others wearing golden armour...but aperently things are not defined enough.....sorrywill work on it more tonight...

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    ok so i realized that every thing was all jaked up so i made changes and decided to add a sense of battle in the backround..;.wich makes me even more confused now....damn!
    father.....update!!

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    i totaly dig the monster in the back w/ the spider leggs

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    father.....update!!

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    I like your alien-like shading, looks great. I echo that just a bit more clarification as to what is going on might help. Maybe just tighten up the edges. Great ribbing shade!

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    i stayed up hell'a late wheres my update hmmmmm

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    That is a VERY busy piece, but an interesting action scene! It needs to calm down a little. Too much black flattens depth. There is no atmosphere between the foreground characters and the ones in the back. Work a little more on proportions too before going into the details.

    Nice updates, keep it up!

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    rist.....thank you....i definetly agree is too buisy....i origanily did this for dsg under title-robot love- but some how it has evovled into something else i'll probably turn it to grey scale and re-vamp. as far as going into preporsotions over detial...i'm trying trust me

    gms don't know the time schedeul last night i didn't drink....i sleppt instead....will update tonight.. promise

    nemia. thank you for responding for some reason in the dgitil world i suck at edges

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    it will get there i hope.....
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    Getting better, but I would suggest to add a thin light blue layer over the background elements.

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    hope it continues on the path you want it to go! looking forward to
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