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    well you asked for brutal critique so I will say one thing: do more studies!!! you obviously have skill, I really like "see no evil" and the portrait of Paul - he's instantly recognizable and well drawn. But I think you're just rushing things and not taking time to give some love to your art. You have imagination but your imaginative pieces show a lack of studies and basics, making them sorta lack some kind of cohesive structure to make them believable.

    so yeah: more studies (life drawing, photo reference, etc), and more love for what you're drawing
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    It's been a long time getting back into it holy crapp...Name:  IMG_0790.JPG
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    Need some advice right now i am stuck with this so far.

    Things i have noticed before but forgot to save it when i fixed it.

    One: the body is out of proportion ( so i am tracking this)

    Two: not much detail and this is where i get lost in my thoughts and suggestions are welcomed!

    thanks! - James
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    Need some advice right now i am stuck with this so far.

    Things i have noticed before but forgot to save it when i fixed it.

    One: the body is out of proportion ( so i am tracking this)

    Two: not much detail and this is where i get lost in my thoughts and suggestions are welcomed!

    thanks! - James

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