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    Some introduction work...

    Big Hello!!!!


    I wanna introduce myself with this 3 pictures. They were done for an "after work game projekt" for a friend of mine.
    One level is set in "baikonur"- the former russian space port- and the bunkers are some of the buildings there.

    C&C welcome- excuse my poor english-


    LoVe YoUr WoRk
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    wow, 75 views- no reply???
    come one people, i´am a newbie and critics are higly appreciated.
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    well i dont really know what to crit, except for nitpicking stuff, they look like some pretty good concept drawings for modeling a map. as i said, only thing i see missing is all nitpicking stuff, but here goes:

    i think the areas seem a little bland... the design of them is cool, but theres no eye candy in there, no wall decorations or things on the ground or anything like that. its kinda sparse. and finally, that ladder on the first pic, it looks like it would be really hard to climb up over the edge, maybe make some sort of a handrail or something that extends beyond the groundlevel to aid in getting on/off the ladder?

    the perspective looks good, and your english is just fine. and dont feel bad if it takes a little while to get replies... sometimes its hard coming up with things to say. no harm meant in it. welcome to the forums.

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