I would re size the head, its too large compared to the body, and his right hand looks awkward I would fix that too also some highlights wouldnt hurt to bring out the form of the fingers, use some refs like your own hand. the diffused light that comes from his right onto the sleeve looks wrong with the bright background I would try either give the diffused light a color or darken the background.
aaaaaaand 4* Stars from me with love!
P.S I loved the movie soooo much it's a piece of classic art of our time absolutely amazing.
Konichiwa Danny-kun! Wohho i speak japanese!..NOT!
Hmm now as you mentioned about the head and the fingers not beeing very visible, you are totally right i should have noticed it before. Guess i was focused too much on his face, i will try to fix this kind of mistakes in my future work.
P.S I don't deserve 5 stars, altho it's very nice to see, i feel a lot of joy in my heart :>
Hmm..why are you not updating more?! xD
Just stopping by to see what you are posting, and to tell you that i have started some studies for my portrait; meaning! i am drawing some traditional fast full-head sketches of myself, witch i shall start posting (did one so far)
The joker steps are very interesting! I haven't seen to many people soft blocking in, and you have a great last result on top of that too! Keep at it!
And have a lovely day ice~
Sketchbook - I really appreciate comments and critique, please visit!
A small update, another exercise this time i drew a human knight being based on a piece made by awesome artist Daarken with a little twist, so it's just a try to be like this guy exercise.
Nearly ten months have past since i bought my love, my shiny wonderful Intuos3.
Taking a look back at the past i'm proud how much i did improve, however i'm also
angry at myself; For being so lazy, and working too little at improving my skills. I should
draw more often i know, and i will try to overcome my weakness which is being lazy
sometimes. I hope the next year 2010, will bring even more joy to my and especially
your eyes. Thank's for all those who supported me in this long curvy and rocky road.
This the first milestone...
Last edited by Icecold; September 6th, 2009 at 07:32 PM.
Going real well in here man, colours are improving heaps,
Keep at it!
Originally Posted by gutss
yesterday, God came to me in a dream and told me that if I don't become a comic book artist, he has decreed that I shall instead be a burlesque dancer.
And I said, "But God, nice panties are so expensive!"
And he said, "Welp, I suppose you better shut up and draw."