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It's a play poster, really. I'm not sure at all how I feel about it. My professor tells me I need more of an interaction between the main character (Who I am portraying as crazy and living in his own cartoon world) and the cartoon elements. At this point in time I no longer want to look at this image all by myself and turn to you guys. I'm not an editorial genius by any stretch, and feel that editorial is my weakest point.
Corel Painter X.
there is too much pull to the right hand side of the image, i can´t get away from there. im not the best with narritve and composition myself but i throw in some suggestions anyway. maybe try encompasing him with the cartoons to draw attention back into the picture, id imagine them swinging out of his tie and sitting in his breast pocket. like kev always says try closing your eyes and visualize the scene until it is clear to you.
Thank you for your suggestions to Mr. spect. I'll play around. Those guys don't take any time to make, so I'll start playing around a lot more with em.
How's the title working on the window sill?