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    Red face My Sketchbook and first post yay?

    Last edited by nohoper; October 17th, 2011 at 10:11 AM.
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    Hello.I like second very much!

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    Sorry for my English.
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    some of them are very busy, try to break them down into shapes that are easier to read. These compositions are very aspirational but i dont think you've quite got their yet. You need to be able to draw al these elements seperately for them to make sense in a composition together.

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    I like your pictures, most of it are fine anatomy-wise (I think) but I'm agreed with Smarty; your pictures looked either very BUSY(Case in point; the second picture) or not busy enough (the second last picture) I think you should try to blur the background / make the main object more focused so people won't be confused when seeing your picture.

    Still, good luck ! ^^ and welcome here !

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    Nice one! It's just the trees are too..well, dark. Or the snow's too bright, compared to the tree and the sky... It outshines the trees in the end.

    Still, I love the detail. And envy you somewhat for being able to draw this kind of cool snow scenery. XD Good luck!

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