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    Color/lighting issues?

    Hola fellow members of CA.

    I feel like there is definitly something missing to this piece, aside from the other issues, because currently it looks far to dull. All critiques are welcome. Thanks

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    Coupla things.

    One, the white background is killin' ya. That'll help the image a bit right there.

    There's too much white overall.

    It's impossible for her to be holding a pole in front of her(as her arm implies) with the pole at that angle, and have the pole and up crossing behind her back.
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    The shirt isn't made of spandex, therefore you wouldn't see the shape of the breast like that. Also the belt looks not much like a belt, and everything looks like its made out of the same material atm
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    Quote Originally Posted by danlambert View Post
    , and everything looks like its made out of the same material atm
    Could you please elaborate that part more? I don't understand what you mean by that?
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