so here's another sketchbook among the masses. i'm an illustration student in brooklyn and i'm gonna be dumping fashionable drawings here from now on.
critique the hell out of me, be an asshole, please! thanks
meissner - agree about the arms, could have given a bit more definition, thanks for your thoughts.
1; portrait of Yves Saint Laurent
1; start of sketch, dress by Wunderkind, a little wonky, needs some fix ups
elaborations on the previous drawings..
Started another book i see?
Beautiful stuff thus far, my crit is that the most recent girl you posted is all face and no skull. You need too extend the appearance of the back of her cranium, which im having trouble thinking of any simple solution for. edit: maybe play with the extension of the jaw line from the outer contour of the face? That's tricky because the face itself is in proportion, and the body/neck is in proportion to itself more or less, but the two disagree slightly... give her big hair maybe?
(I've probably read it somewhere but dont remember, do you go to pratt?)
Good to see you posting again!
Try get some nicer lines in there. Instead of using 5 or 6 little lines use one long flowing one. It will look nicer, and will likely make it a bit more stylistic for you.
Nice stuff, keep it up.
rarebit - thanks for the thoughts on the drawing, i see what you mean about the lack of skull, i'll try to go back in and fix it up a bit. yea i go to pratt, here in frigid brooklyn!
fraz - thats a good suggestion, thanks!
mischevious - thanks!
1; mock Chloe ad, done in ink then colored on the computer
2; older inking
didn't do an art today, but heres and older peice.
hey thanks a lot!
so still no new works, almost finished with the comme des garcons peice, i'll have that up tommorrow prolly, heres some older work.
awesome sketchbook man, gorgeous stuff.
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...99#post2372999 <- sketchbook...
http://woopatworks.blogspot.com/ <- Blog...
thanks! the stuff is mostly referenced, but the comme des garcon peice is more or less made up, it really varies from piece to piece..
1;comme des garcons finished, not sure how i feel anymore, will color though.
a little gif action, also some sloganism for fun. have been sketching too but nothing of substance to show yet...
Wow, Great textures and dynamic.
Scetchbook: View the exhibitionist's stuff.
The girl and the luger piece is fantastic. Lets see some updates!
lens flare renaissance