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    i think it rocks just some ideas would be to have some kind of light or lights coming from the truck or person just some ideas =) o mabe breaklights like the engine is still running sorry im dun dig the pic

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    I really like to location but the tank isn't my thing. I do however find it kinda blurry. Maybe if you were to sharpen some areas then it would even out. Anyway really nice!

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    Thanx guys! I do agree on the blur... Any ideas on how to sharpen further?

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    hard edge brush above an to the right of the soldier on the rocks

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    Geia sou file
    Well i also have to agree about the blur thing.
    The work seems like a speedpaint but with some spots that you made with more care(like the truck and some tree i see).You can sharpen also by adding more detailed contents.
    For example make a more detailed texture for grassland areas by working a little more on each spot.
    In general its nice, but if you want to describe exactly what you want to, you have to put in, more details

    (welcome to CA, i hope you start a sketchbook soon )

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    Sharpened it up a bit. Any better?

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    Last edited by stathis; January 8th, 2009 at 11:32 AM.
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