My new years resoloution was to finish one page of my comicbook a week, so I have until thursday to fine tune this and move on to the next page. I'm hoping to get some good crits while I work on the borders and captions.
I'm going for a damaged, impressionist look rater than a slick traditional comic look.
It's imperative that this first page communicates without dialogue to a reasonable extent. Although dialogue and narration will be added.