I hope this is the appropriate place to post this. I was working on this about a year ago and after writing 3 stories and drawing about 5 pages my computer died. I had no physical copies so I gave it a break and now I'm ready to start over. It's going to be better than ever. This is the only content I still have, other than the under drawn pencils with lots of mistakes.
I added the first panel of the first page to show the dramatic changes in style and method. My goal is to finish at least 1 panel a day and finish no less than one page a week.