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    Adventurer in CA world

    Finally I made it into this place, so greetings everyone.

    I think that in order to improve my skills I need to get constructive feedback and critics and share my passion with people.

    Am 23 years old, I am really passionate about art.

    I have started to draw seriously about two years ago it was on purpose to make better 3d arts in which I have a larger experience of five years.

    I've just bought a digital pen this month

    so lets rock.

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    Well, there is some good ability in this picture. The only probklem , is the musckes themselves, are either too big, or in the wrong place, and the body itself , is very out of proportion. I don't know if you are going for a cartoony feel? I f you are some good anatomy studies, and some rules of thumb to go by when you draw certain parts of the body. What I mean is the face the psace between the nose and mouth is near equal to the space between the nose and the eyes. They space between nose and mouth should be around half of the space from eye to nose. That is a rule of thumb that I use, others are that the body should be around 7 or 8 heads tall, I forget which, but something like that is good to use. Just take a pen , and do some sketches of figure, and break down the body parts, and truly learn how the muscles move , and work.

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    Thanks for the reply it was fast while am burning my brain searching haw to edit this thread, the attachment is too big.

    I'll post my last works so far and go for your tips as fast as I can.

    "where is the damn edit button"

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    Also, just to say this, This took me a while to learn , anatomy , doesn't mean showing every muscle possible, and bulging like mr olympic's, but knowing, in a certain posem which will be seen, and which won't. What muscles are stressed, and what muscles are relaxed.

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    anyway more drawings ahead.
    just to note that the images are not chronologically ordered .

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    Here are some more sketches

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    I really like wolves , critics expected.

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    Really fast poses nothing special,in the same time i need to figure out about the best way to do this.

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    KOF, Jojo's bizarra, Fist of the northstar.

    Good start. Look up Loomis, Bridgeman online to see books on anatomy and copy them. They will help.

    And the saying of CA, draw from life. Figures, plants, cans, apples, shadows, etc. will help pull all of it together.

    Keep going! Like the rugby players!

    "Everything must serve the idea. The means used to convey the idea should be the simplest and clear. Just what is required. No extra images. To me this is a universal principle of art. Saying as much as possible with a minimum of means."
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    Im very glad that you have noticed the inspirations beyond the first drawings
    and I already have loomis books you mentioned ,by saying copy them you mean copy the books or copy the drawings .
    By the way they are handball players ('-_-).

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    You have nice studies here and you have to keep them up.
    Well about loomis i checked it once to see how he draws his anatomy, i didnt copy him
    In my opinion its better to understand than copy.
    Just keep observing and memorizing situations(of muscles,basic shapes of body,etc.)
    You can be better so do it

    see ya

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    D'oh. Color me corrected. And copying the illustrations of loomis can bring on understanding and change perception to "see" more in what is viewed in life. Applied learning.

    Still like the HB players (<---me correcting self).

    "Everything must serve the idea. The means used to convey the idea should be the simplest and clear. Just what is required. No extra images. To me this is a universal principle of art. Saying as much as possible with a minimum of means."
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    Worked on loomis figures ,I tried both methods and i can feel that i have memorized some more details, i have done more loose figures but not worth posting since it was just to see the progress.
    here is the studies so far.

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