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    hiya! This is a picture I am currently working on. However by now I could use a fresh eye on the whole thing, because I'm not entirely certain I'm heading into the right direction. So! as this part of the forum may already suggest, crits are more then welcome!

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    wiiiii

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    Totally weird and sort of creepy, but I like the idea. The butt in the middle doesn't seem to have much in the way of shading and is looking a bit flat.


    I didn't think it was possible to be called an artist when you have nothing to say. It's like being a writer who publishes individual words as books and expects to be praised for it.
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    I'd also like to suggest you check out my recent pectoral studies man... The first head of the pecs start from the clavical and overlap the other two heads and creates a folding fan sort of form. what it looks like from the second version is that you have the clavicular head going underneith the sternal and seratus heads (this could be seen best by the figure's left side armpit.)

    hope this helps to some degree.

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    There I was thinking the bubbles distorted all of that. Silly me.


    I didn't think it was possible to be called an artist when you have nothing to say. It's like being a writer who publishes individual words as books and expects to be praised for it.
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    haha no Black Spot, that is me not knowing my anatomy after all this years on ca Thanks for the critic!

    Hey Crazy Dude SRD! I checked it out, did some research and almost totally redid that area, hope it is better now. Thank you very much for coming by in my thread!

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    I'm a bit lost on his right shoulder, I pushed it a bit backwards, but it still looks very strange... :/

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    last update for today;

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    Cheekbutt in the upper bubble isn't distorted. He looks like a hunch-butt for that reason.

    However, since I don't know what you're trying to achieve, that probably isn't much help. Sorry......

    I prefer the version with the knees to the left, but I don't know why.

    Nah! I figured it out. Somewhere in my brain it says that people coming from left to right are coming toward me. I'd be interested to find out if I'm the only one wired that way....

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