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    Critique First color please

    This is the first coloring i have done Please Critiq it.

    I dont know where to upload it so im posting a deviant art link.

    Look below for image.

    Last edited by BrokenDesign; November 30th, 2008 at 09:43 PM.
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    Read the rules, post images, not links. If you go to the advanced menu, there is a manage attachments button that will walk you through attaching an image.

    Here you go,
    resized and attached.

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    Smile .

    I feel proportionally this is a good piece, also for effect too.
    Although i do feel the piece would be even more impressive, if the colour use for shading was more of a tidy line.
    For example, the maroon shading on the red to be one solid curve/line. And in a block fill.
    If that amkes sense, i hope it does.
    Asides that, nice picture, you should be proud for your first colour peice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mansell View Post
    I feel proportionally this is a good piece, also for effect too.
    Although i do feel the piece would be even more impressive, if the colour use for shading was more of a tidy line.
    For example, the maroon shading on the red to be one solid curve/line. And in a block fill.
    If that amkes sense, i hope it does.
    Asides that, nice picture, you should be proud for your first colour peice.
    NOt 100% sure what you mean.. little help?

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    I think he means sharpen the edges of your color/shading work.

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    the focous here is on the boobs
    if u want that good if not then maybe rethik the huge knockers
    besides that though im ok with every thing else
    only 2 small concerns
    1. y dose here arm just end like that.
    2. whats with the random red shapes in the black areas are they part of the desigin or are they just hilights if so then why do they receive hilights on top of the hilights.
    o and please dont send us to DA that place scares the S*** out o me
    and thank Bai Fan For goin and fetchin it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Demo View Post
    the focous here is on the boobs
    if u want that good if not then maybe rethik the huge knockers
    besides that though im ok with every thing else
    only 2 small concerns
    1. y dose here arm just end like that.
    2. whats with the random red shapes in the black areas are they part of the desigin or are they just hilights if so then why do they receive hilights on top of the hilights.
    o and please dont send us to DA that place scares the S*** out o me
    and thank Bai Fan For goin and fetchin it
    I colored the peice, it was pre drawn inked by another body.
    2. because i thought they looked nice, but i went about not doing that in that context in my second peice.

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    I'm sorry, but I'm not 100% sure if this place is about coloring lineart done by other people...

    You really should have said that in the beginning.

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    I thought this was your line work.

    If you are going to use someone else's artwork, make sure to give credit to the actual artist.

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