Okay, I made this for no reason...what does it look like to you and how could I make it more like what you're thinking.
It doesn't look like much of anything at the moment.
What do you want it to look like?
Unless you are being paid/hope to sell a piece, art should not be about what others think. It should be about what you want it to be. I agree with MiniGoth. What yo you want it to be?