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    Need Help Fleshing out the pose

    Alright, I need help with correcting the proportions with the figure and how to go about fleshing out her anatomy. The angle is from the ground up. Any help regarding anatomy and proportions would be wonderful.

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    looks quite right for me, but it would be better to see if it was a bit smaller^^'

    it looks better then my sketches for a pose
    remember that the pose looks like an all seen position for sexy womens
    in act paintings, erotic fantasy, model magazines..

    so it should be nice if you can add something special to it to make
    it different

    Underground Scifi Alien would be nice to get some critics or coment to my first longer work here
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mortamika View Post
    looks quite right for me, but it would be better to see if it was a bit smaller^^'

    it looks better then my sketches for a pose
    remember that the pose looks like an all seen position for sexy womens
    in act paintings, erotic fantasy, model magazines..

    so it should be nice if you can add something special to it to make
    it different
    Fixed. Now, could anyone help me with fleshing out the anatomy?

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    you mean to let it look more like a woman?
    or to add zylinders and circles to it?
    my english isn't the best so i'm not sure what fleshing means..-.-

    for me the pose looks right at the moment
    but ok...if you want to make one of the legs more to the front,
    you should make one knee a bit higher then the other one.
    atm the left leg must be behind the right on. or did i see it wrong?
    (left and right by the viewer and not by the woman)

    Underground Scifi Alien would be nice to get some critics or coment to my first longer work here
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    Not a bad start for a figure, very gestural.

    The head to me looks a little too small for the size of that ribcage. There is also too much space between the ribcage mass and the pelvic mass.

    If you look at the skeleton (especially one with the weight of muscles applies) there really isn't very much distance between the bottom of the ribcage and the Iliac crest of the pelvis.

    The legs are also too short if where you stopped drawing a line is where you intend the feet to be planted.

    Good stuff, Rock on!

    ...my humble and uneducated opinion.

    -Nate
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mute View Post
    Not a bad start for a figure, very gestural.

    The head to me looks a little too small for the size of that ribcage. There is also too much space between the ribcage mass and the pelvic mass.

    If you look at the skeleton (especially one with the weight of muscles applies) there really isn't very much distance between the bottom of the ribcage and the Iliac crest of the pelvis.

    The legs are also too short if where you stopped drawing a line is where you intend the feet to be planted.

    Good stuff, Rock on!
    Um...Those are kneecraps. The feet and bottom half of her calves are not shown.

    Thanks for the pointers. I'll try a new draft. Usually, visuals tend to help a lot. I'm trying to learn as much as I possibly can and I figure I can only learn from those who possess more experience than I.

    Also, this shot is supposed to be taken from the ground upwards, so I am keeping that in mind.

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